Very good. :)

Nice write

Hi tara :)

I found this poem to be really sad :(

I think a lot of people can relate to this poem. ANyone whose been in love and hurt before.
I'd only advise you to break this up into stanza it'd be easier to read and maybe put some commas in it...other than that I enjoyed this write :)

Rhymed so well, which made the flow nice, and a good relatable topic