Comments : God what have I done

  • 13 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    Very powerful
    I can feel the pain and loss
    Its a hard time in life where you have just lost what feels like a part of you and you feel complete emptiness...
    Very good write!

  • 12 years ago

    by Chevalier des Fleurs

    I relate not in the aspect that I have lost her, but for the fact that I have come curious close to once or twice. It is a painfully strong write that confesses your love and emptiness you are feeling. I hate the feeling of losing someone who is your world it it utter chaos and a morning that consumes you. Beautiful write but so sad.
    5/5