Crush

by annie doss   Apr 11, 2011


What am i suppose to do
i fell in love with somone new
i want to tell you how i feel
but u may not know how you'd deal

this feeling its crazy
insane in its own way
i barley know you
and yet im drifting away

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  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Hi,

    1344 visits and not a single comment?

    Nice little concept

    There are a few typos which I have re written below

    What am I supposed to do
    I fell in love with someone new
    I want to tell you how I feel
    but u may not know how you'd deal

    this feeling it's crazy
    insane in its own way
    I barely know you
    and yet I'm drifting away

    (supposed instead of suppose, bearly instead of barley and it's and I'm instead of its, im)

    Good effort though, good emotion.

    regards

    Darren

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