by Chelsey Apr 11, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I've set aside pages in my diary |
by Shamia
LOVED IT...from the title til the last line!!! |
Another interesting read that was enjoyable. Once again an emotional write and the poem came across as honest. I don't know if this poem reflects a situation you are in or if it reflects a situation of your imagination but I really enjoyed every part of this poem even though it is a sad read. It is a shame when the truth doesn't change anything. |
How good does it feel to just write this down on paper and get out all those emotions? It always makes me feel a lot better to just admit that I made a mistake and be honest with myself. It takes a strong person to not only recognize mistakes, but to fix them. Great job again, you know I love the love poems haha |
by ECILA ice
I don't know whether to appreciate it much or would just like it because I've read some of your piece and i felt the impact on those poems..but on this one, i know it has its loneliness and desire yet there's something in it that lacks. |