I don't know whether to appreciate it much or would just like it because I've read some of your piece and i felt the impact on those poems..but on this one, i know it has its loneliness and desire yet there's something in it that lacks.

by the way, It's flawless..

How good does it feel to just write this down on paper and get out all those emotions? It always makes me feel a lot better to just admit that I made a mistake and be honest with myself. It takes a strong person to not only recognize mistakes, but to fix them. Great job again, you know I love the love poems haha

Another interesting read that was enjoyable. Once again an emotional write and the poem came across as honest. I don't know if this poem reflects a situation you are in or if it reflects a situation of your imagination but I really enjoyed every part of this poem even though it is a sad read. It is a shame when the truth doesn't change anything.

5/5

LOVED IT...from the title til the last line!!!