by Mello193
This was short but awesome. I think alot of people can relate to this, how we want someone to be, and finding out the sheer pain that is who they arent. Great poem |
Thks |
by Dark Secrets
I like the tittle... You! it shows much anger. Only I don't feel like the poem has that anger, try to fish into your mind your heart and express, not only what you would say, but how you feel. |
My heart couldn't hide |