Comments : Rules

  • 13 years ago

    by Meme

    I broke a rule and broke a trusting heart

    i find this line so deep and touching, worst thing to do is to break a trusting heart ..

    Amazing poem Michael :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    NIce piece Michael.
    How many times are we left wondering about things.

    The truth is there is a strange paradox
    In the mystic myth of Pandora's box
    Our fantasy is a odd addiction
    Blurring many lines between fact and fiction

    Will the truth ever be known? Or will everyone be left deciding their own facts and truths? Letting their minds run wild believeing what runs through?

    Great job on this one.
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 13 years ago

    by Sean

    Intriguing! At first read i believed it to be simple and beautiful, on the second perhaps subtlely complex in meaning...but mainly i think it's just very well written.