The hollow's devine: naught's approach (room 5)

by Mello193   Apr 14, 2011


Did you let go of life
Did you learn how to bleed
This is the last haven
Last warning to head
No more poems left to read
All thats left is the evil deed
Now you bite the hand that feeds
Follow the black where it leads
No going back you agreed
Time to plant the final seed
Eternal hunger, eternal need
Did you left go of your soul
Did you let go of your heart
From now on in blood
Live on in forgotton art

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  • 12 years ago

    by East Poetry

    Forth line from the bottom... did you mean to use the word "let" and not "left"

    Ok... over all I really liked all of these poems.
    its ironic how well you can describe the nothingness or eternal darkness considering it's a form of non existence. the way you describe owning it and making it your haven is quite astounding and dark indeed. I actually like to call this concept of nothingness... EXFINITY.

    do me the honor... read my poem exfinity.

    you may also dig my EPIC poem
    called ONE in the SAME... It's a very DEEP poem
    and very long... but good if you can grasp it's depth.

    much enjoyed... thank you for reading my
    initial Poem - The infinity of matter.

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