Forth line from the bottom... did you mean to use the word "let" and not "left"

Ok... over all I really liked all of these poems.
its ironic how well you can describe the nothingness or eternal darkness considering it's a form of non existence. the way you describe owning it and making it your haven is quite astounding and dark indeed. I actually like to call this concept of nothingness... EXFINITY.

do me the honor... read my poem exfinity.

you may also dig my EPIC poem
called ONE in the SAME... It's a very DEEP poem
and very long... but good if you can grasp it's depth.

much enjoyed... thank you for reading my
initial Poem - The infinity of matter.