Keep it up ... pal

Great stuff, i havent read anything from you in a while, but it is just as good as i remember

Forget your name
Erase your pain
this part is my favorite, names seem to hold so much grief sometimes it would be easier to just forget, you have a way with words

I loved it

Great job hun(: x
5/5

This poem is well written. I am however curious on what I was supposed to get out of the last could lines. was it:

Much more than this
Emptiness
Can you survive.

OR

Much more than this
Emptiness,
Can you survive?

It was just a thought. I wasn't sure if you excluded punctuation on purpose. Either way, the poem was great.

The last lines are

Much More Than This,
Emptiness
Can you survive?

i always exclude punctuation haha
thank you for your comment though ^u^

Continuing...

I really like these poems.... A LOT!

You see..I ponder on the nothingness quite a bit myself. I myself am more the optimist on the whole topic... but the concept of nothingness is still a deep fascination of mine.