Comments : In Their Presence

  • 13 years ago

    by Boy

    In the presence of....

    ITS A REALLY GOOD POEM.

    step by step u explained the things in that way... every stanza is different than other. it because of their presence.

    i like this stanza more than all.

    In the presence of depression
    Time stops for a little while
    When you take a step forward
    You are actually going back a mile

    its a really true feelings and it happens to me aswell i tried a lot to get over but the more i tried to do it i get inside it...

  • 13 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    ..... every stanza gives a short sms wid a moral....;) keep it up...toooo coooooolllll....;)

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem reflects the cross yin and yang and overall karma of most of our days and nights... amazing