Whiskey Drowns (Etheree)

Yeah...drinking does not solve anything; just
makes one numb giving them a false sense of
happiness to forget all...good job on the ethree!

No clue what an etheree is...maybe why I don't write like this......should probably look it up :) that aside, your poem was good....written as though you were stoned when you wrote it.....Id say drunk, but I have yet to find someone who's brilliant...or even simply thinking deep when in that state of mind haha

Excellent work. I regret that I have already used my votes

Whiskey burns blurring memories
Fractured confidence disconnected

I could really relate to those two lines. I don't drink and don't plan on drinking because I've seen what it has done to my family and I don't want to be another nail in the coffin. I think this piece was very well written. I loved your diction. Nice work deary. -Nik

I agree with Cindy, good job with the form. Drinking doesn't solve any problems, just creates more for a person.