When Will It End (Etheree)

So much rhythm and rhyme, "Shattered emotions, broken souls,
orchestrating each marionette.
While hiding behind computer controls".

Nice. I like how the lines get longer as well to give a visual appeal to the poem

'Shattered emotions, broken souls,
orchestrating each marionette.'

What a great line Cindy, and the whole poem is perfect!
I read it several times, getting more from it at each reading. Good work!

'Shattered emotions, broken souls,
orchestrating each marionette.'

What a great line Cindy, and the whole poem is perfect!
I read it several times, getting more from it at each reading. Good work!

I love this one, it's relatable, simple in it's own way, truthful to every extent, and finally makes you want to keep on reading to the last word because you know that it's so true! God I wish I could make a poem like this short but filled with so many visuals and emotions. I love this poem it's going to my favorites poem list!

- Moria Bella Bair

P.s. thank you for reading my poem! Have a lovely day.