Comments : When Will It End (Etheree)

  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    'Shattered emotions, broken souls,
    orchestrating each marionette.'

    What a great line Cindy, and the whole poem is perfect!
    I read it several times, getting more from it at each reading. Good work!

  • 8 years ago

    by Timothy

    Nice. I like how the lines get longer as well to give a visual appeal to the poem

  • 8 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    So much rhythm and rhyme, "Shattered emotions, broken souls,
    orchestrating each marionette.
    While hiding behind computer controls".