Fixation [Etheree]

I wasn't as fussed on this poem compared to some of your others as I struggled to connect with it. That said It was nice to read Etheree as I don't remember ever reading one before so it was new to me

4/5

Nik, Your writing speaks to me with each word and you did a great job with this form. I love how it relates to your title so easily and how I am sure many can relate to this. You had the emotions set in and you made them come alive with your words. The flow of the poem was good but due to the form I think it was a little messy towards the end. Overall, though, you did a really good job with the message of the poem and how you present it.

I couldn't really find one part of your poem that stood out as I find you need all yours line to complete the thought of your poem. That's one thing I liked though that your poem was all together and not broken up in pieces and that is vital with a form like this one. Good job. :]

All in all, I am really glad that you did this form and I am pleased with what you wrote. I hope you try more forms in the future as it really tests your creativity. You are always shinning with talent and I am glad I can see it progress in your work. Great job and keep writing!

You have done well with this form! Liked the
read from start to end..good images as well!

I did this form for the first time and i found it beautiful. Your poem has just added more stars to this form. Beautiful choice of words flowing so smoothly, great write friend.

all the best and take care :)

It is nice work with the form and words that give the reader vivid images to take with them.