Wow, girl you got talent. I like the words that youve chosen to write this. And I like the poem in general. Keep it up. :D

Wow, this was so heart wrenching. It's hard for a person to find beauty in themselves when people closest to them cast down hateful stares.

"When will it go away?
When will things be ok?"
^I appreciated the repitition of these lines, I felt it gave great depth.

Brilliant work my friend!
Take care

I find the line "pain walks on all fours" very intriguing... personified pain, I suppose it makes me think of hell hounds. I wish you had carried on with that more, in fact, I think a few more descriptive or metaphorical lines would be nice. But that's my take.

I certainly hope you don't feel like this all the time. I know the burden and the release, but just remember that this is not forever, and there is so much available to you in the world, so don't give up hope. :)