by Stephanie Apr 19, 2011
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Death is around the corner |
by Soft Parade
I enjoyed your poem, it bestowed the lurking of death quite well; always just around the corner. The middle two lines of the last stanza could do with a couple more syllabes to balance out the flow in connection with the first two stanzas. Overall I thought it was excellent though. |