Pretty simple as its coming right from heart. Very nicely expressed.

all the best and take care

I'm with Nitin. A simple piece but full of true emotions. I could really relate to this piece a lot. Hope to see more from you hun :] -Nik

Nice work on this. A good message that even though your heart is broken or hurt by this love, you found a way to accept and deal with that pain. Your heart is healing and you are dealing with the memories but open to loving another in the future.

A simple poem that describes one love for someone and how they left. I have seen many poems like this and it becomes very cliched but you did a great job getting your emotions out and that is what we aim for in poetry most of the time so what you have done is fine. :]Your poured your heart out and what more can you do. A story that many can relate to and put their feelings into.

In all, you did a great job venting out your heart and the emotions inside and it is nice to see a positive attitude in this situation when many would be sad and be down. Great job and keep writing!

Yeah...our life beats and we know we have to go on...even that is not in our hands. A sad write of longing and pain...take care.

One word. . . Excellent!
I can feel your pain through your words and i believe you to be a very strong man..very strong indeed.