Wow, subtle yet thrashing! |
by Kiko
Kay, I really like the language here. The visuals are striking, and the sardonic tone of your message comes through loud and clear. |
Images that came in my mind while reading this are too scary to put in words. This piece brings real strong aura along & its better to maintain distance :) |
by Ingrid
Kay, |
by Cindy
Kay |
by gracey grey
Kay, a poignant write i must say. The adventures of human, of strenght, and weakness, of endurance and how one overcomes the wretched are all wrapped in this poem. 'Jesus Loves You, I don't' sums it up beautifully... Yet giving another perspective to the whole poem. Hugs. |