A very interesting poem that gives the story of someone who lives like that from their point of view. Your words are very powerful and I hope you two continue to keep up with your amazing talents and if possible do another collab together. I was barely able to tell who wrote what with how well the poem went together and with how it flowed. The emotions in this poem are interesting as they invoke sadness and shock with what has become of their life.

All in all, you two have done a great job and I can't wait to see what each one of you will do next. Both of y'alls poetry is very good and combining your talent to make this poem is very creative and shows that you are willing to step out of your safety box. Great job and keep writing!

Well done and it is difficult to tell who wrote which line. Blended well. I see a change since the first time I read this, in these lines and the genre from Explicit to Misc. I think I would have left the word as it was since it that word had a bigger impact on the reader. In any event, well done to both of you.

I wonder what word will float
around next... Cheap?