by Dark Secrets
I like this one, it expresses a lot of emotions with no direct mention of them. I can sense pain, waiting, longing, loneliness and depression from your words. Well written, nice, short, clean cut. I only have one comment on this one; in short poems try not to repeat a word more than once; it puts you off the beat or rhythm of the poem. |
by Mello193
This blew my mind |