by Jad
A interesting poem that could have several meanings. I love your word usage as always and I find the words always placed in a good way to maximize their effect and strength in the poem. Your flow was good and it kept smooth throughout the poem. The emotions in this poem weren't exactly meant to stand out as you were more telling about something then try and express your feelings. I could however be wrong about the whole interpretation but who knows! :P |
by Britt
I love that this can be taken so many different ways. In one setting it could be what it seems, that of an april fools joke, someone who goes about jesting and being the "class clown". |
A very different type of poem as far as content goes. I enjoyed the change up , it was not a typical poem. |
by Meena Krish
This is a type of poem where something is written with intended thoughts but can be translated in many ways. Like been the person who is always played joke upon or breaking free from that role or just coming out of a hole..all in all a very good write where it leaves the reader to interpret rather then tell us what it is...liked it! |