This poem is amazing. The words u chose and the flow was perfect. I look forward to the finished work. And erics right at least we have hope and it saddens us people in the world dont and thats why we tell em. Great job.

That was so well written. A poem everyone can relate to because like you stated, tragedies are happening everywhere. It really gives your heart a squeeze, 5/5.

mandy :)

Wow this is amazing!
short yet powerful :]]
i love it <3

keep writing!

5/5