I don't think that I've seen this form before, but from what I've seen you've done an amazing job. Your words created such beauty, and filled the page with color. I loved this description, "Blue-eyed butterfly" created such a wonderful vision. It's crazy how time can be both an enemy and friend. Much enjoyed!
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Raj
You did a great job with the form. Loved the imagery you created with your words. I love Butterflies...and the image of one with blue eyes was great :)
Love Cindy

I was struck by the blue eyed butterfly and I could imagine a child or an adult trying to get close to a butterfly to see their eyes, chasing that butterfly all over a garden or a nice yard. Nice image.

You did a wonderful job with this form and I think I might just try it. I have done this form about three or so times before but the beauty and amazing flow of your poem is tempting me to write another one! :] Anyway, back to your poem, the flow was really good as that is what the poem is all about and also your words are very strong in this poem. You were vivid with your descriptions which makes it easy for me to see everything as I read through your poem. It also is very hard to write a really good piece having to stick to the guidelines but you seem to have done it with ease.

All in all, I am glad to see you are trying new forms to test your poetic skills and also to showcase your talent with your dazzling writes. I hope you continue to try new forms and I am also glad to see you use that talent you have. You are improving as a poet each and every day. Great job and keep writing!

I like this form and you have written this poem beautifully using this form! Liked the
read :)