Palms (Tanka)

Beautiful descriptive poetry without being cheesy. short and eloquent. i enjoy it.

LOL Sylvia posted on wrong poem hehehe :)

This poem of yours is something ells and really flows well.

Your choice of words are great and with such few words you have blossomed this piece so well.

Stunning writting

5/5

Love it Ingrid

A peaceful short and powerful at the same time.

Like your choice of words.

Well done 5/5

I admire how you can use few words to tell such a lovely story, like gazing at a painted picture or having someone discribe a image that the eyes are longing to behold. Very well done, kel.

A very beautiful Tanka with great description that I found to be very helpful as I could see all of this in my head as I read. The imagery was perfect with this and made the visualize very nice. :] The poem flowed really good and though this is a short form you did a great job with it. Many people think this is a easy form because of how short it is but they should reconsider that you are trying to describe something with a restricted amount of words and its such a short poem it is hard to do. Nevertheless, you did a great job and I can't wait till you try another one.

All in all, you are very good at forms or at least the ones you have tried and I hope you continue to challenge yourself and try new forms. You are very creative and your talent is wonderful and I am soo happy I can read your poems and I hope you never stop writing. Once again I just want to say that this was beautiful and your flow and imagery were wonderful to. Great job and keep writing!