Drift Away.....

Wow, what an amazing piece of writing, I wish I was actually there experiencing it.

You have described things so well that you can clearly picture the scene in your head and go there to imagine it.

Through your writing you created a feeling of calmness and peace for the reader, an escape from everything else.

Excellent poem, very uplifting. Well done.

Ah yes I can go along with that idea. Well done.

I'm glad you are back with us and your poetry is amazing as always and sorry if my commenting isn't what it used to be! :P Anyway, your poem flowed wonderfully and the structured helped it along. The imagery was amazing in itself and you made many images appear in my head as I read. It's as if I am the person you are writing about and I'm just relaxing in a park or something and listening to the world around me. The message of your poem was very simplistic and I liked how you used every day words to describe a every day event.

All in all, you have not diminished in your writing whatsoever and I hope you continue to write these amazing poems that are really simplistic and show your creativeness. Anyway, I would just like to say that your poetry is a joy to read and I can't wait for your next one. Great job and keep writing!

As I read this I was singing to it too! It had
good rhymes as well as rhythm..just loved
this write!!

Really wish to be in that park someday. Could imagine with the help of your words...how beautiful & peaceful that moment would be.
Great write, powerful enough to bring a smile on every reader's face.

all the best and take care