Aha! Larry this was so unbelievably cute that it actually made me chuckle...The analogy of sprite was priceless. One would turn that into a funny poem , but you've actually described something so sweet and sensual here.
I really loved every minute of it and it put a smile on my face. It's been a while since a poem did that to me! :)
Chelsey

Larry, Larry, Larry!

Clever, concise, cute, relate-able...I enjoyed it immensely! Husband liked it too ;)

I definitely agree with Chelsey!

It was a surprise end for me..
haha.. you put a smile on my face, and I wish my life would end up like yours!! :D

5/5