Comments : Remember

  • 13 years ago

    by Britt

    The first three lines in the second stanza really stuck out the most for me, I thought it was beautifully written and really held so much meaning. The entire poem held a lot of meaning, and you have so much written simply that the emotion is so easy to delve into.

    That ending, just give me one more second...ohh, it broke my heart. All it takes is just a look, a touch, anything you can do in that one second to see and prove the depth and love. Beautifully written!

  • 13 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    Thought we haven't spoken much
    but common phrases and pointless names,
    I let myself glance in your eyes
    to show you there is more than emptiness-
    meaningless conversations
    can become pregnant life

    ^
    From which corner of your brain did you take this???
    Whoooo,girl!...
    This was such a beautiful,nostalgic write...
    This poem was so captivating..I will probably come back and read it 3 or 4 times because that how I do!
    Beautiful! Beautiful and more more beautiful :)