I really enjoyed this ode to spring. You have a wonderful talent for language.

I might suggest a "Springier" title, however. I know you want to "spring" a surprise on the reader at the end, but I think that is not really needed. The poetry is good enough to stand on its own without any surprises.

That made my day.. and my buddy here just told me the same thing.. Thank you for taking the time to pass on those great and constructive words, Kiko. R

That made my day.. and my buddy here just told me the same thing.. Thank you for taking the time to pass on those great and constructive words, Kiko. R

I like this poem a lot
spring is great when it comes
this poem gets a 10

Lovely poem Rob
We are well on our way to winter. The picture your words have painted already have me longing for warmer days.fortunately I get to ride my bike winter or summer over here. Lol. Well written Rob