Truly Amazing! Such a beautiful poem. The of ones heart. Amazing poem.

I love it
very nice imagination i really feel it
the words the emotions the meaning the goal all that was there
well done girl

You are an absolutely amazing writter hun, this is my favourite of all your poems, i love everything about it, the story, the emotions, everything. well done sweetie 5/5 < well deserved, take care xx

In every battle he then fought
He seems to loose his strength
And he keeps wishing that she
Will come and carry him on her wings

my fav lines 5/5

I have 2 soldier brothers n ma grandpa was also a soldier n ma papa a cop.... n i can understand d pain n suffering dey go on tryin @ protect deir motherland, fightin $ unknown ppl.... walkin d thread where death lurks behind every corner layin in ambush.... 4 em dey have only dreamz, memories, hopes, neva endin wait etc which either nature or fellow soldiers kno.... a gr* tribute 2 d tru unsung heroes.... nyc 1 yet again gal... keepz itz upz....;)

I can really relate to this in so many ways since Michael is the patron saint of knights

very well written