Displaced Aspirations

by White Orchid   Apr 29, 2011


Empty spaces
Remain untouched
Mind erases
Memories clutched

Our dreams
Only history
Ripped seams
Today's mystery

Feelings profound
Never acquired
Waited around
Time expired

Empty spaces
Left bare
Aspirations displaced
You unaware.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Amy

    This was very good the images in your words came to mind... Good rhymes and very well written! Also loved the end of this poem:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Amy

    This was very good the images in your words came to mind... Good rhymes and very well written! Also loved the end of this poem:)

  • 13 years ago

    by tainted melody

    I loved this one girl...it was so dif. from your usual style of writing but it really worked for this poem.

  • 13 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    This is definitely well written. When I read your words, I see a child trying to please thier parents, and because of that they pretty much throw away their dreams. Brilliant write!
    Take care