by White Orchid Apr 29, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Empty spaces |
by Amy
This was very good the images in your words came to mind... Good rhymes and very well written! Also loved the end of this poem:) |
by Amy
This was very good the images in your words came to mind... Good rhymes and very well written! Also loved the end of this poem:) |
I loved this one girl...it was so dif. from your usual style of writing but it really worked for this poem. |
This is definitely well written. When I read your words, I see a child trying to please thier parents, and because of that they pretty much throw away their dreams. Brilliant write! |