Another Romance

Sad with lots of undertoned emotions. A magnificent poem. Thank you.

WOW!!!! That opneing line hit me so hard., I just had to read on. Your words enveloped me in a story that repeats so often, to many. I know that this piece is amazing, truly worth the read!
Take care

What can I say? This poem was soo sad and your emotions in this piece are heart filled and the message in which you speak to us is amazing and stunning. The flow of the poem was strong and the words were all touching and had a good influence throughout this poem. The structure was good and it helped the poem with its flow. Also your imagery was good as I was able to see what was going on in the poem.

"Love used to mean so much
to me, now it's as empty
as your body next to mine.
You use to move me like
rushing waves of ecstasy
but somehow I've been
pulled under yet another
romance."

This was my favorite stanza and it was a killer of an ending. I loved how you are ready to face the truth and confront it by telling yourself what really is happening. You are very mature and I am glad to see you venting and being able to speak your heart and not hold back. A sad love poem that really took me in with ever beat and every line.

All in all, I am impressed with this poem very much and it has to be one of the poems I like most from you. The words are strong and you let your feeling go in this poem and you let the world know how you feel and it is sad to read but a very good eye opener. Many other people feel this way and they should read this and be encouraged to move one. Great job and keep writing.