by Yakari Gabriel Apr 30, 2011
category :
Life, society /
other
Never again will I allow you |
Amen. Seriously. I can connect to every last emotion in this piece. I can definitely feel that anger in your voice, it truly comes through. It takes a lot to move forward and not allow someone to walk all over you and 'conquer' you, but sometimes it's impossible to even bare anymore. I just loved what you expressed here, it seemed like a vent more than a poem, but some parts were poetic and I think that gave the poem a nice balance. I love when I can connect to poems, this one was one of those. |