Comments : Before we fully blossom

  • 12 years ago

    by JustAnotherPoet

    I really love this poem of yours.

    I want you to know... I'm sliding,
    and its directly into you.
    where I promise there's a bottom
    and a splash it will ring true.

    ~ Yes, love can sometimes feel like sliding. You can't control it and it will fall faster and faster.

    5/5!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    I can't tell you how much I can relate to this poem you wrote. Which is why I love it so much. <3

    "
    What it boils down to,
    is can the both of us hold trust?
    That we can break through new ground,
    As time waters the seed of "US"."

    That's always the big question when it comes to relationships honestly..5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "Before we fully Blossom"
    A very eye-catching title. Just capitalize the first letters.

    'If it ever feels... I'm hesitant,
    or not fully on my way.'

    That is nice. The ellipsis is just well-placed! It's like the narrator really is hesitant. Great job

    The rhymes and simple word choice was just great. Keep writing
    -X