by Lady Nik
Wounds scar my emotions, |
I feel this was probably one of your stronger pieces I've read. I felt like although it is a simple expression of feeling, you seemed to put a bit more thought and time into this one. 'Knowing is only half the battle' is what came to mind here. I totally know what you speak of. You know what is right for you, what you deserve but sometimes we're just not ready to make that step. Only thing I'd suggest is trying to write your lines so that you don't need to depend on 'the' 'and' etc to bring your thoughts together. Sometimes you can eliminate several of them and the lines still sound the same. ' |
by Sylvia
Austin, this is one of the more powerful poems you have written and shows a growth in your work and also shows your maturity. There isn't much I can add to the other commenters except well done. |
by Dreamofolwin
A strong emotionsal write by you Austin...that I thought was well written and expessed. Many of us have been there... |
by Sunshine
AUSTIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
by Milo
Great poem, the title breaking the habit symbolizes change, and one willingness to do so means alot. |
I had to read this. Only because the title was one of my favorite songs. :] Anyways, onto the poem: |
by Britt
Wow...can I just say, WHAT an emotional piece! |