You did an awesome job with this form! I personally HATE writing this form because it's too dang hard to nail, but you did so with grace! :)

I love the repetition, the line you used. You can broaden it to fit anything or keep it all the same thought and tune, and thats important when doing a form like this :)

I love the rhymed resigned and entwined! Brilliant rhyme there :)

Aaaah,this seems like a heck of diffucult form to pull out x_x omy...I'm even scared to try.... But this here was so lovely :') Maybe you can sell it? To get produced to a song...since it has such a melodic tone to it! Well done!;)

Yet again another deep write.

I agree with britt that you did and awesome job with this form. I have to be honest I have never come acorss this form before but after reading your poem and the explanation of the form underneath I was blown away

5/5