Blue Like The Sky [Tanka]

by Elizabeth   May 5, 2011


Looking to the sky
a familiar shade of blue
I find comfort there;
your memory, your spirit
will forever hold my heart.

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  • 9 years ago

    by GB

    Simple and beautiful. I read some of your formatted poetry and enjoyed it so much.

  • 13 years ago

    by Carrie

    I love to see that you are writting again :) Keep it up I've always appreciated your writting.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Eli, this is amazing, it was a very very heartfelt poem.
    The word choice was simple, but the form of the word was very deep, and the images you drew were just incredibly touchy!

    I loved it a lot, well done//
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    That is really beautiful, very peaceful indeed. Nature seems to bring the best out of most people. Loved it
    Connie

  • 13 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww I love it... The structure is short, and you wrote such a sweet poem. I love the meaning and you've said a lot with a few words. Great job!

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