by Lady Nik
I really liked how you used the works and names of other poets :] I thought that was a neat thing to do. You always write such touching poems and this one is just as good as the others I've read from you. Always full of emotion and nothing short of sweetness. Very nice poem indeed :] thanks for sharing deary. -Nik |
Of John Keats and W.B. Yeats |
by Milo
A great poem, the kind that people will come back too. Thanks. |
by Britt
One thing that will make this poem 100% perfect, would be to not make each letter in the beginning capitalized unless there is a full stop before it. Grammatically speaking :) |
by mira
You know i really smiled when i read it and my heart beatso fast every time i read it |
by Sunshine
Karluz i really loved this poem a lot, i dont love many love poems written here! but I really thought this wass hearfelt, well said, well expressed, well written! |
Picky stuff: |
by Meena Krish
This poem is not only lovely and tender but it |
Wow! Karl I'm speechless! This poem is SOOO beautiful and unique! And I must say it's hard for love poems to be unique sometimes but this was exceptional =) it gave me such a sweet feeling, this girl is super lucky! I loved the allusions to the famous poets and poems (which most are my favorite!) such a nice lovely poem... Great job! |
by Anonymous
Nice bro. original. catchy. nice flow. I bet all the ladies fall for this one |