The 1st part is very familiar, but I liked it however, and I enjoyed reading love poem by 2 ppl..like u, cause u both used simple language with plain emotions and such raw feelings..

I love the way it makes u feel everything beating through out the piece, i really love the closing lines, and the 4rth stanza and 1st part twoo..for they hit home for me..

5/5 for ur efforts guys..

Hmmmmm.... ma fav subject poetry n how wud i b left behind in readin diz one.... put in a simple format.... really luvd it u both... shud come up wid more of dese.... keep it up frenz...;)

One of grtst..thnx fr sharin gal..

I really liked the collab. It was Beautifully put together. Truly Amazing!

A wonderful collabaration. So touching, and real emotions. Love it. Theses stanza's were particularly deep.

All those eye contacts that we share
Will remain as the most beautiful memories in my head
I remember those days when you used to stare
When I wrote this letter for you, never to be read

I never knew that it's not enough
And love was meant to be embraced
If we can't fight for it from the start
Our lives will end up as a big swirl

Congratulations on a beautiful write.