by Sierra Rae Jun 20, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
*I'm embarrassed!! I usually write for myself not for other people to read!! but here ya go anyways...it's really corny and you can't make fun of me for any of it!!! lol-enjoy!!* |
by Broken
sierra, u have no reason to be embarrassed....that was really really good..i could picture every word of it....great job |
by Megha
aww..tht was a super poem..i loved it..;_) |
by Allen
Ohhh, hey that's a sweet poem :D you should be proud of it ;) and yeah, day dreams are great aren't they?? ;) |
Hey its not corny... Its so cuuuiiitttte! Cute....i can see you blushing while writting this poem... Sweet dream... I would love to see such dreams again and again.... |
by Ashmore
That isnt corny at all! That was great! lol, its how I think sometimes too. You write well, so dont think you suck or your corny because you arent! You are a good writer. Thanks by the way for the comment on my poem, much appreciated. |