thank you!! this guy made me write it about him so the before words were towards him...lol. glad to hear you liked it!!

this poem was really cute, although you probably couldve made the ryming scheme a little better, but good job!

i was reading this to my friend and we both loved it

That isnt corny at all! That was great! lol, its how I think sometimes too. You write well, so dont think you suck or your corny because you arent! You are a good writer. Thanks by the way for the comment on my poem, much appreciated.

Hey its not corny... Its so cuuuiiitttte! Cute....i can see you blushing while writting this poem... Sweet dream... I would love to see such dreams again and again....
:) Trincy.

Ohhh, hey that's a sweet poem :D you should be proud of it ;) and yeah, day dreams are great aren't they?? ;)

aww..tht was a super poem..i loved it..;_)

sierra, u have no reason to be embarrassed....that was really really good..i could picture every word of it....great job