Can You?

Can you
Be with me when I'm lonely?
Can you
Look at me when I'm lonely?
Can you
Led me cross to the road?
Can you
Think me all the times?
Can you
Be a sense of security of mine?
Can you
Glance me more?
Can you
Be with me a little more?
Can you
Be with me at the nights to watch stars?
The stars with me
Can you
Hold my hands tight and never let go?
Can you
Come in to my heart
Can you
Give me some hope?
Can you
Give me some tenderness
Can you
Like me back?
Can you
Be my love?

seemed like lyrics to me? well for starters the can you in every other line was annoying if you ask me, you repeated the second and forth line, why? overall just a repetitive nonsensical questionnaire, didn't seem to have flow nor rhyme scheme, over all could be edited, and made into something interesting but overall, uninspired.