Dying Thoughts

This write has such a deep depth of sadness
to it and as I read it, it sounded more like a
sad song which rhymed so perfectly with
sentimental values..the ending just touched me..nicely penned..take care.

Austin, this is another example of how you are growing as a poet. Somewhat different that your other work. Sadness abounds in this write. Such feelings and emotions come forth as you described how words from a lover or that is what I took from it, are slowing killing the feelings in your heart, making you feel dead inside. If this were a true situation, I would say, you don't need someone like that in your life, someone we love should not cause this to happen, they should lift us up with their words. Well done.