by Larry Chamberlin May 8, 2011
category :
Special events /
mothers day
Our mom cleaned the daily grime, |
This is beautiful. Moms are the best, to bad they are not around forever. |
by Sunshine
Larry is this amazing, i love ur rhyme schemes..u never ever need to force and i like the messages and emotions that u make sure to have the poem stuffed with. |
by Britt
This is such a touching and beautiful tribute to mothers, those still with us and those who have passed. Great rhythm and rhyme, love the structure poetically, it's amazing. Very emotional and truly tugged at my heartstrings. Beautifully written :) |