Abandoned

by tainted melody   May 9, 2011


Looking through the broken glass,
life crumbling around her,
she steps into her hollowed past,
memories never closer.
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He stares into her empty eyes,
so different from before.
She heartlessly ignores his cries,
as is listening were a chore.
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She always used to dream of him,
how he would sweep her off her feet.
Now her spirit cold and dim,
so sick of battle then defeat.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    I think that was awesome maybe it will happen again just think only one momant away peace and love

  • 13 years ago

    by White Orchid

    This was awesome girl, what you wrote just based on a title you knew you wanted. The flow was amazing and it was very heart wrenching and is something that affects your emotions and that's a great thing because that's what poetry is about! Very nicely done!! :)

  • 13 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    Wow. This piece is beautiful yet so sad. I loved the last stanza. It held so much emotion and truth. How you could dream of someone but then get so tired of fighting for them. I could totally relate. A very well written piece, loved the details. And the theme a great one to pick, love does often abandon people. I'm sure many can relate to this poem. 5/5

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