Wow. This piece is beautiful yet so sad. I loved the last stanza. It held so much emotion and truth. How you could dream of someone but then get so tired of fighting for them. I could totally relate. A very well written piece, loved the details. And the theme a great one to pick, love does often abandon people. I'm sure many can relate to this poem. 5/5

This was awesome girl, what you wrote just based on a title you knew you wanted. The flow was amazing and it was very heart wrenching and is something that affects your emotions and that's a great thing because that's what poetry is about! Very nicely done!! :)

I think that was awesome maybe it will happen again just think only one momant away peace and love