I liked this poem a lot to be honest it was short but so full of feeling. |
by Jad
I have been waiting for you to write a new poem and alas you finally write one and I am pleased with what I see. As always, your metaphors are wonderful and they are very vivid and lucid. The poems message was also sad and very emotional. You were able to get out your feelings in a creative way and still keep the power of how you felt. The poem flowed really good from beginning to finish. The stanzas were well structured and I found nothing that really needed changing. Imagery was just lovely in this poem and brought it to life with colorful pictures brought into my mind with your words. |
by Ingrid
You held no love of seasons |
by Lady Nik
Such beautiful words for such a sad poem :[ It makes me think of love. How can something so pure and beauitful cause so much pain. This poem makes that clear. Very well done. -Nik |