This is a very eloquent way of stating F you..and I love it :)

I love your title and the emphasis of your brackets! Karma indeed never skips a visit...it may take a while, but you get hit, hard.

I love the idea of a coffee drenched dream, because coffee makes me sleepy, so to me it definitely made sense! Lol

Nicotine seams in a sweater of thorns is such a sharp, stinky image, but a great one! I love the metaphors here and I love the descriptions. Very vivid and very striking. Another great job :)

This is one of the most unique poems that are full of tenderness and rage, both at the same levelss, that ive ever read..
and i am in love in your poem..
this is very unique and it really involved some perfect metaphors and some breathtaking lines!

i LOVE your piece, I really really think you are a very talented member and am looking forward to read more poems by u

5/5
hope this wins

Nicotine seams
In a sweater of thorns
I just wanted-
[To be warm.]

^This was great, definitely caught my eye, very nicely written.

I thought you had a lovely poem here, 'coffee drenched dream' may not have been all that original but 'sweater of thorns' was a bit better. Great piece!

I like the idea and wording of this piece. I am not sure I like the way it is put together however. It has little structure in the way of rhythm and rhyme. Though, I do like free flowing poetry, I tend to be partial to a more structured piece. Over all I liked it. It was very well said and I love the message. 4/5