You know truth hurts, as rabea said some people will think its cliche, but for me, it wast the reason i read you piece :),
look, i really dont know why people came up with the cliche trend lol.. just causee we know the meaning of the word doest mean its cliche..this is
novel..i loved the poem by all means, and repeat rabeas opinion..u know ur words were nailed and i think u have done a fantastic job.

i definitely relate and the poems hits home for me
5/5

btw great closing ;)

A very heartfelt and real poem. One of my favorite things in poetry are emotion and truth, and this has both of those concepts.

"the uselessness of today's world"

I love that line. So so SO true!