Nostalgia [senryu]

Wow! There is so much emotion in this! Whether we lose someone in death or just losing a relationship with them the pain is still intense and strong, i thought u captured the emotions with just those 3 lines. You are a brilliant writer! And there is hope for the future of ones that we have lost in death, but it doesnt mean there isnt pain at the moment it happens. Just to let you know never lose hope! Wonderful write on this you are a rare talent! :-).

I think you've tapped into something that a lot of people can relate to, including myself. Nice job with this senryu.

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Awwh Benny :( such a sad poem. Your words are simple but the pain behind them hits hard and deep. It's never fun to miss someone for such a long time. Hope you feel better soon dear. :] -Nik

These three lines are enough to say the depth
of one's sadness and the pain memories bring..nicely written..take care.